the rivers waltz to rapids
slowed by rocks they roll
your teardrops dancing
guided by the slow tempo
conveying heartfelt sorrow
as they gentle sway away
defused supporting new life
gone the tears the sorrow
your self esteem restored
may happiness be with you
now and till you are no more
your ever caring presence
your caring hands that tend
may peace goodwill love
be truly your best friends
Pure genius. In a few words, you created such a unique feeling, a perspective of sorrow and hope and the same moment, in a few words.
I like how you shaped the words of your poem into a diamond. So very clever.
My mom is very ill right now. Respectfully, I have gone the roller coaster of dealing with snobby doctors, money hungry hospital administrators, nurses who come into the hospital room and barely say hello. Maybe it’s my imagination, but the healing arts society is not as “Dr. Welby” as I remember when I was a kid.
You, and you alone, have brought to me a new hope in the direction of the healing arts community. For, as I know that you are very smart, you also have a caring heart. Please, never lose that endearing combination.
I know that we live in this high-tech society now. But sometimes the high-tech folks need to bring it down a notch, and rediscover the power of caring of the human heart. You are a leader in this new movement of heart-felt caring in physicians.
I am so sorry to hear about your mother. I’m even more sorry to hear of the kind of experience you have been having with the heath care system. I trust and hope that your mother receives the kind of care she deserves, that you will stay strong, and that everything will end up going smoothly. My thoughts and prayers are with you all. And like always, thank you for your very kind sentiments.
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All Poetry
the rivers waltz to rapids
slowed by rocks they roll
your teardrops dancing
guided by the slow tempo
conveying heartfelt sorrow
as they gentle sway away
defused supporting new life
gone the tears the sorrow
your self esteem restored
may happiness be with you
now and till you are no more
your ever caring presence
your caring hands that tend
may peace goodwill love
be truly your best friends
With good intent, take care,
Mick
Nice poem. It feels very innocent, though. Is that what you were going for?
I do believe so! 🙂
There is so much beauty in that one line. Very well said, or, rather, written.
Thank you 🙂
C’est magnifique, Phoebe. 🙂
Quite lovely.
Beautiful, short and simple.
😊 😊
We need a deep, warm and gentle cleansing to clean our soul. I like the imagery in this poem.
😊 😊
I really love this Puppy Doc 🙂
Thank you 🙂
most welcome!
Great Post!
Thanks! 🙂
A pleasant vision in a world full of confusion…….a respite maybe.
Pam
Hugs 🙂 🙂
Very Lovely Poetry..!!
Thank you 🙂
Most Welcome 😊😋
Dear Dr. Phoebe,
Pure genius. In a few words, you created such a unique feeling, a perspective of sorrow and hope and the same moment, in a few words.
I like how you shaped the words of your poem into a diamond. So very clever.
My mom is very ill right now. Respectfully, I have gone the roller coaster of dealing with snobby doctors, money hungry hospital administrators, nurses who come into the hospital room and barely say hello. Maybe it’s my imagination, but the healing arts society is not as “Dr. Welby” as I remember when I was a kid.
You, and you alone, have brought to me a new hope in the direction of the healing arts community. For, as I know that you are very smart, you also have a caring heart. Please, never lose that endearing combination.
I know that we live in this high-tech society now. But sometimes the high-tech folks need to bring it down a notch, and rediscover the power of caring of the human heart. You are a leader in this new movement of heart-felt caring in physicians.
Sincerely,
Richard
Richard,
I am so sorry to hear about your mother. I’m even more sorry to hear of the kind of experience you have been having with the heath care system. I trust and hope that your mother receives the kind of care she deserves, that you will stay strong, and that everything will end up going smoothly. My thoughts and prayers are with you all. And like always, thank you for your very kind sentiments.
Take care,
phoebe
❤️
You are very creative and productive in your week of exams…….?
Teehehe hi helen…maybe being stressed out helps with the creative juices…?? 😛