Like a dove in the cleft of rocks
tranquilly enveloped
suffocated
with a slumber
assuaged by silence
beneath the breath
of crescent glow.
Catch her
Save her
Treasure her
you whom her soul desires
and let her be freed.
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your poetry is crisp and of crimson taste. Great.
read my poem THE GLOOMY MOON .AND LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENT.
Hi Phoebe Oozes with passion Thank you for liking “Shoreline!” Peace and Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.
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Hi Phoebe There is that care for life that is missing in so many! Thank you for liking my poem “Mates Flat!” Be Safe and Well. #TheFoureyedPoet.
I love this. A beautiful image and a wonderful sentiment.
Thanks so much. 🙂
You are quite welcome.
This a beautiful piece I enjoyed reading it and keep up the great work, thanks for sharing Anita
Beautiful
Heaven! Gooooooood work! I loveeeeeee !
Thanks! 🙂
Yesss! 😊🙈
Hi PuppyDoc. Love it. Thank you for liking “Around The Table!” Peace and Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.
Ah, a romantic epic from a lady wordsmith has been evoked from the PuppyDoc !!! Beautifully done, Phoebe. 🙂
Aww thanks, PapaBear! 🙂
This piece has gravity… And it pulled me in.
🙂 🙂
Yesss. Yesss. me too!!:)
Very nice. I always enjoy your posts, but this one especially so. I don’t usually comment because you have so many followers and commenters I almost feel like I burdening you with another fan reply. 🙂 🙂
Thanks so much, Jim. 🙂 And I’m very glad you did comment…it’s great to hear from you! Take care! 🙂
So beautifully written.💜
Thank you so much 🙂
Wow, just like my goddess!!
🙂 🙂 🙂
You poem is so beautiful, Phoebe. It really touched me. I heard an interview with a former Australian model on TV the other night and your poem almost tells her story. I’ve put in a link: http://www.news.com.au/entertainment/celebrity-life/90s-bombshell-kate-fischer-now-unrecognisable/news-story/a0e901f2869ec604f8689f1a78b66316
We are struggling to settle back in at home after our rip to Tasmania. We had such a good time!! xx Rowena
You are so kind, Rowena…thank you. And I’m happy to hear you had a wonderful time on your trip! 🙂
superbly analysed the thoughts
🙂 🙂
Still such a gift for the written word. I have been away so long and missed your musings. I am thankful to see them again my friend.
It’s so nice to see you again! 🙂 🙂
And you as well! Hope that life is being as wonderful to you as you are always to it!
🙂 🙂
Like many clefts of rocks surrounded by doves
A throat lump gulped
suffocated
with the noise in hiding
beneath the breath
of epic falls
I caught her,
saved her,
treasured her,
to bind her
for centuries
in pain
of attachment
and detachment.
Such lovely words. 🙂 🙂
Thanks Phoebe! 🙂
And so was was poem 🙂 Lovely as space time.
🙂 🙂
Lovely.
Thank you 🙂
Phoebe,
I love your minimilist style. You have a unique ability to convey a stunningly complex image in just a few well-chosen and descriptive phrases. That is so incredibly hard to do, but I’m so impressed, and I’ll be looking for more! Beautiful!!